CASSIE MAEHope
Jade Hart
Jenny Morris
&
Kelley
ARE HOSTING A BLOG HOP
ON THEIR SITE
'FALLING FOR FICTION'
http://falling4fiction.blogspot.com.au
'FALLING FOR FICTION'
http://falling4fiction.blogspot.com.au
Hookers & Hangers Blogfest July 16th & July 18th
A word from the girls hosting the blog:
"We all know how important the first and
last lines are in every chapter. This blogfest will hopefully get your
HOOKERS and HANGERS polished making it impossible for readers to put
down your book and leaving them begging for more!"
On July 16th, post the first sentence from each chapter.
On July 18th, post the last sentence from each chapter.
Post as many as you like!
We will be judging everyone’s first
three HOOKERS and first three HANGERS.
We’ll each pick two winners
(MOST ENTICING HOOKERand MOST IMPOSSIBLE HANGER)
making a total of ten winners!
Winners will receive a 10 page (double spaced) critique and a Friday Spotlight on FFF!
We’ll each pick two winners
(MOST ENTICING HOOKERand MOST IMPOSSIBLE HANGER)
making a total of ten winners!
Winners will receive a 10 page (double spaced) critique and a Friday Spotlight on FFF!
HERE ARE 10 HOOKERS I HAVE CHOSEN
FROM MY CURRENT WIP
THE SECOND BOOK IN THE PROTECTOR SERIES
TITLED: HE CAME FOR MINE
TO BE RELEASED THIS OCTOBER
Seb brushes his hand slowly along my throat and moves it downwards to gently cup my breast, before kissing me deeply on the lips.
I went to Wednesday training expecting to meet up with Ryan, but I was disappointed when another trainer took the class.
I stood in the small yard and looked up at the light shining through the windows of Jazz’s apartment and tried to control my emotions and stop myself from running up and barging into the room!
I watched as Jazz spent the morning with Ryan and I stood far enough away from their quiet conversation, so that I was not noticed, as they sat together in the park.
A week went by as we selfishly indulged ourselves in our relationship, repairing the damage that had been done, when there was a knock upon the door.
Days passed by and our new family group, Bliss, Xavier, Zane, Grayson and I, bonded together well.
I was in the newly decorated room, my new haven, when Bliss found me.
“Look up there, look she’s there!” someone called.
I woke early and lay in bed savouring the feeling of Seb’s body pressing up against me.
The next day I had arranged for Jazz and myself to spend time with Auron and Yolanda at ‘The Sanctuary’.
49 comments:
You opening hook is hot. Nice job. If your goals was to get us all excited and wanting more, you succeeded. haha. Can't wait to see how it ends.
Ooo, these are great! I think my favorite is number nine :)
You had me at the first one. :D
These hookers show that there's a lot going on, and I'm definitely intrigued. Nice work!
These are some sizzling first lines!
Haha, I was literally going to say what Stina said! Great job!
Well done! I think #1 is the best!
I especially like #8.
That's a heck of a way to start a story! Wowza! Steamy :) I have a character in one of my WiPs named Grayson :)
Nothing like a good grope and a kiss to hook us right away! Great job!
Thanks, sounds like you need a cold shower! Glad you like it!
ooh-la-la! You had me at #1!
Thanks Kelley.
Glad you liked them Stina.
Thanks L.G.
Thanks for your comment Emily.
Thanks Kyra.
Thanks Lisa.
Thanks Carol. I had to work a little longer on those words, so they flowed with the emotion and urgency I was trying to create.
Grayson I a cool name! Thanks for your comment.
You really start the book out with a sizzle. And I love all the names. I really like #9 too. Can't wait to read your hangers,
Glad you liked the Leigh.
Well done!! I think #5 is my favorite!!
Um, #1 got my attention pretty quickly.
Hot first hook to make us yearn for more. Very nice. :)
Thanks for the follow Kimberly and the comment.
Thanks for dropping by Jay.
Thanks for the comment Michael.
Great hookers and I agree with the others, #1 definitely caught my attention. I also love your character names, they are different. Enjoyed reading your posting!
Definitely has the romance elements...which hooks me!
Well that was certainly an unexpected first line. 8 and 9 are my favs.
Thank you for leaving such lovely comments and for dropping by.
Of course it does, thanks for commenting.
Thanks Aldrea.
Nice feel for your story here. Sounds like there are a few comings and goings! (Errm... hopefully that doesn't sound rude). :D
I think I liked #5 the best :)
Wow! The first line is definitely a jaw dropper! Thanks for sharing these! Looking forward to the hangers!
I think #2 is my favourite, but #1 definitely got my attention! hehe
Ha Ha Ha! Is that a pun? It isn't really as steamy as it seems, it just so happens that they are my beginning lines.
Thanks for choosing and for dropping by.
Thanks Lynn(e).
Thanks for your comments Trisha and for stopping by.
Wow, releasing in October. That's awesome. Good job with these!
8 has me wondering ...
Great hookers! Liked them all but #1 and #4 stood out for me.
#3 and #8 really got my attention, wonderin what was next.
Yes, I am glad you noticed that one!
Thanks.
Thanks for the comment, Suzi.
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