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HE CAME FOR ME

BOOK ONE IN THE PROTECTOR SERIES

http://www.amazon.com/He-Came-Book-One-Protector/dp/1447875591/ref=sr_1_cc_1?s=aps&ie=UTF8&qid=1422879701&sr=1-1-catcorr&keywords=he+came+for+me+book+one+in+the+protector+serieshttps://www.smashwords.com/books/view/82996
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HE CAME FOR MINE

 BOOK TWO IN THE PROTECTOR SERIES

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/82996         http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/he-came-for-mine?keyword=he+came+for+mine&store=ebook




Sunday, 15 July 2012

HOOKERS & HANGERS BLOG HOP

                      
Falling for Fiction CASSIE MAE

Hope

Jade Hart

Jenny Morris

&

 Kelley

 

 

 

  ARE HOSTING A BLOG HOP
ON THEIR SITE 
'FALLING FOR FICTION' 

http://falling4fiction.blogspot.com.au





Hookers & Hangers Blogfest July 16th & July 18th
A word from the girls hosting the blog:

"We all know how important the first and last lines are in every chapter. This blogfest will hopefully get your HOOKERS and HANGERS polished making it impossible for readers to put down your book and leaving them begging for more!"

On July 16th, post the first sentence from each chapter.

On July 18th, post the last sentence from each chapter.

Post as many as you like!

We will be judging everyone’s first three HOOKERS and first three HANGERS. 

We’ll each pick two winners 
(MOST ENTICING HOOKERand MOST IMPOSSIBLE HANGER) 
making a total of ten winners!  

Winners will receive a 10 page (double spaced) critique and a Friday Spotlight on FFF!


HERE ARE 10 HOOKERS I HAVE CHOSEN 
FROM MY CURRENT WIP
THE SECOND BOOK IN THE PROTECTOR SERIES
TITLED: HE CAME FOR MINE

TO BE RELEASED THIS OCTOBER

  1. Seb brushes his hand slowly along my throat and moves it downwards to gently cup my breast, before kissing me deeply on the lips.   

  2. I went to Wednesday training expecting to meet up with Ryan, but I was disappointed when another trainer took the class.

  3. I stood in the small yard and looked up at the light shining through the windows of Jazz’s apartment and tried to control my emotions and stop myself from running up and barging into the room!

  4. I watched as Jazz spent the morning with Ryan and I stood far enough away from their quiet conversation, so that I was not noticed, as they sat together in the park.

  5. A week went by as we selfishly indulged ourselves in our relationship, repairing the damage that had been done, when there was a knock upon the door.

  6. Days passed by and our new family group, Bliss, Xavier, Zane, Grayson and I, bonded together well. 

  7. I was in the newly decorated room, my new haven, when Bliss found me.

  8. “Look up there, look she’s there!” someone called. 

  9. I woke early and lay in bed savouring the feeling of Seb’s body pressing up against me.

  10. The next day I had arranged for Jazz and myself to spend time with Auron and Yolanda at ‘The Sanctuary’.



52 comments:

sydneyaaliyah said...

You opening hook is hot. Nice job. If your goals was to get us all excited and wanting more, you succeeded. haha. Can't wait to see how it ends.

Kelley Lynn said...

Ooo, these are great! I think my favorite is number nine :)

Stina Lindenblatt said...

You had me at the first one. :D

L.G. Keltner said...

These hookers show that there's a lot going on, and I'm definitely intrigued. Nice work!

Emily R. King said...

These are some sizzling first lines!

Kyra Lennon said...

Haha, I was literally going to say what Stina said! Great job!

Lisa Regan said...

Well done! I think #1 is the best!

Carol Kilgore said...

I especially like #8.

Hope Roberson said...

That's a heck of a way to start a story! Wowza! Steamy :) I have a character in one of my WiPs named Grayson :)

Cassie Mae said...

Nothing like a good grope and a kiss to hook us right away! Great job!

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks, sounds like you need a cold shower! Glad you like it!

Leigh Covington said...

ooh-la-la! You had me at #1!

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks Kelley.

C.M.Brown said...

Glad you liked them Stina.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks L.G.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks for your comment Emily.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks Kyra.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks Lisa.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks Carol. I had to work a little longer on those words, so they flowed with the emotion and urgency I was trying to create.

C.M.Brown said...

Grayson I a cool name! Thanks for your comment.

Jenny Morris said...

You really start the book out with a sizzle. And I love all the names. I really like #9 too. Can't wait to read your hangers,

C.M.Brown said...

Glad you liked the Leigh.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks Jenny.

Kimberly Gabriel said...

Well done!! I think #5 is my favorite!!

Jay Noel said...

Um, #1 got my attention pretty quickly.

Michael Pierce said...

Hot first hook to make us yearn for more. Very nice. :)

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks for the follow Kimberly and the comment.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks for dropping by Jay.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks for the comment Michael.

Gossip_Grl said...

Great hookers and I agree with the others, #1 definitely caught my attention. I also love your character names, they are different. Enjoyed reading your posting!

elizabeth seckman said...

Definitely has the romance elements...which hooks me!

Aldrea Alien said...

Well that was certainly an unexpected first line. 8 and 9 are my favs.

C.M.Brown said...

Thank you for leaving such lovely comments and for dropping by.

C.M.Brown said...

Of course it does, thanks for commenting.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks Aldrea.

Nick Wilford said...

Nice feel for your story here. Sounds like there are a few comings and goings! (Errm... hopefully that doesn't sound rude). :D

1000th.monkey said...

I think I liked #5 the best :)

Lynn(e) Schmidt said...

Wow! The first line is definitely a jaw dropper! Thanks for sharing these! Looking forward to the hangers!

Trisha said...

I think #2 is my favourite, but #1 definitely got my attention! hehe

C.M.Brown said...

Ha Ha Ha! Is that a pun? It isn't really as steamy as it seems, it just so happens that they are my beginning lines.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks for choosing and for dropping by.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks Lynn(e).

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks for your comments Trisha and for stopping by.

Amy L. Sonnichsen said...

Wow, releasing in October. That's awesome. Good job with these!

Roxanne Galpin said...

8 has me wondering ...

souldestructionblog said...

Great hookers! Liked them all but #1 and #4 stood out for me.

Suzi said...

#3 and #8 really got my attention, wonderin what was next.

C.M.Brown said...

Thank you Amy!

C.M.Brown said...

Yes, I am glad you noticed that one!

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks.

C.M.Brown said...

Thanks for the comment, Suzi.

Anonymous said...

.thanks for sharing

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