THE FORCES OF MIST
By Carolyn Brown
(An approx. 410 word sci-fi set in the future)
The shadows
crept across the wall as the air surrounding Sandy chilled her to the
core. She took a deep breath and
continued to move forward, through the tunnel leading to where she knew the
others were meeting.
Quietly, she
approached the opening to the large room, scared from the jagged rock walls of
the old mining tunnel.
Backing
herself up against the wall, she ensured that she would not be discovered by
hitting the control panel of her amulet, enabling the device to engage its
cloaking technique, keeping her hidden from the gathered group inside.
“We will
engage in combat at the arranged time. Ensure all parties are enabled and
ready to proceed!” The leader of the assembled group announced.
“Yes sir!
Are there any new instructions?” One of the gathered soldiers asked.
“Ensure all
parties remain undetected until the designated time. We do not wish to be detected before then.”
Sandy pushed
her body further into the wall in a reactionary response to the sound of
footsteps approaching, hoping her shield would hold and that she would not be
detected by whoever approached.
She was
mesmerized by what she saw, as this unknown party closed in upon her. He was striking, breathtaking, she could see
that he was not human, as the cloud of mist, a distinct feature of this race, trailed behind him, but it did not detract from his manliness or his perfect
features. Sandy gasped
in surprise at his beauty and was immediately concerned that she had given away
her position when he seemed to make eye contact with her for a fleeting
moment. Her heart pounded, waiting for
the outcome of his detection. She was
surprised when he ignored it and continued past her to move into the room where
the meeting was taking place.
“Nice of you
to eventually join us, Jackson. As you
can see, we started without you.”
Sandy felt
the need to move closer to obtain another glimpse of this individual, she knew
now, was named Jackson, but she controlled her overwhelming compulsion and
forced herself to remain positioned against the wall.
The meeting
continued with the leader of the group delivering instructions and directives
to the party within.
Sandy was
shocked when she overheard the one named Jackson indicate his intention to take
out the administrative systems of the authority governing the world, using a
new device developed by their scientists.
“The device
has the potential to be undetected by all known security systems on Earth and
once administered will wipe out their communications, leaving their forces vulnerable."
(To be continued)
14 comments:
Ooo! A beautiful man with a dastardly plot.
This sounds similar to the tension/device used in the season finale of Alphas. Only that one basically killed everyone while yours just destroys communication. Slightly less catastrophic but only slightly.
Very interesting piece.
I absolutely want one of those special amulets, Carolyn! And maybe one of Jackson, too, lol! Oh wait, but not if he's really the bad guy...
I want to know more!
Oh I wonder if they'll go with his suggestion? I wonder if Sandy will get to know Jackson - me thinks she will. ^_^
The most dreaded words one can read... "to be continued" - looking forward to the next installment.
You worked it out Mary!
As I do not know what you are talking about Michael, as I have never seen Alphas (But will have to now, I hope you will forgive my indiscretion.
We will have to wait and see Gwen.
Well, that is good, but you will have to come back next week!
You might just be right Helen. Nice to see you again.
I am sorry Julie, will try to post the second entry next week.
Great story!
Mmmm... a Sandy and Jackson liaison would be nice... what say you, Carolyn?
Subterfuge, infiltration, global threat, and sexual tension, and all in the first instalment... Bring on the war. :)
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