WRITING PROGRESS

HE CAME FOR ME

BOOK ONE IN THE PROTECTOR SERIES

http://www.amazon.com/He-Came-Book-One-Protector/dp/1447875591/ref=sr_1_cc_1?s=aps&ie=UTF8&qid=1422879701&sr=1-1-catcorr&keywords=he+came+for+me+book+one+in+the+protector+serieshttps://www.smashwords.com/books/view/82996
http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/he-came-for-me-book-one-in-the-protector-series-c.-m.-brown/1113030642?ean=2940011475573

HE CAME FOR MINE

 BOOK TWO IN THE PROTECTOR SERIES

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/82996         http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/he-came-for-mine?keyword=he+came+for+mine&store=ebook




Wednesday, 2 July 2014

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Krista McLaughlin - http://www.kjmclaughlin.com/
Hart Johnson - http://waterytart23.blogspot.com/

This month has been a busy one, once again, for me. I have still been busy writing "Forces of Mist," which is coming along well, getting closer to the end of the first draft stage. 

If you are at all interested in being a Beta Reader, please leave a comment below, it would be great to share some of my work and receive some feedback. I hope you don't mind if  I post an excerpt below to tempt the taste buds.

I have also been involved in a couple of hops and a few blog tours, which have been fun.

My only regret with being this busy, is that I unfortunately have been unable to find the time to visit as many blogs as I would have liked. I hope you all understand. 


Carolyn


An alien vessel was hovering above them. Roberts was unaware and was still screaming abuse at her. Jennings came rushing through the opening towards them, a look of sheer horror upon his face.

He slammed his body into Roberts to gain his attention. “Shut the fuck up! Can’t you hear what’s above us?”

Roberts glared at Sarah and Jackson, “Yeah and I am sure, he is the cause of this. It’s most likely his doing!”

Spank started running about the cave, barking at the noise in a fit of uncontrollable fright.

“Spank sit!” Sarah called to no avail, the dog seemed uncontrollable.

Jackson raced towards him, kneeling beside Spank, he gathered the dog into his arms and consoled him. Immediately the dog settled and quieted down. Placing the dog into Sarah’s arms, he said, “They may just be patrolling for me, wondering why I hadn’t joined the others yet. Stay here, keep quiet. I will find out what is going on. Sarah, you and the others need to stay hidden for a few days, do not venture further west, if you do, I may not be able to protect you.” Jackson quickly caressed Sarah’s cheek, turned and almost ran from the cave.

Roberts tried to stop his departure, but Jennings held him back.

Jackson was worried, this kind of patrol only occurred for a discovery of major importance. He did not believe his kinsmen were just looking for him, but did not want her to worry.

He intended to prevent any patrolling in the area in the hope of allowing the three humans an escape back to their home.











 

6 comments:

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

I'm looking for a critique partner for August! Of course, I posted about that today and now have a lot of offers. But I did really enjoy the excerpts you posted during the Challenge.

Gina Drayer said...

Being busy is a blessing and a curse. It's great because it means you're moving forward, but it also means you can't do all the eight hundred things you want to do.

Congrats on coming to the end of your draft!

Loni Townsend said...

I understand about the busy-ness. Best of luck staying on top of things!

Loni

Patricia Lynne said...

Forces of Mist is what you posted for the A to Z challenge right? If so, I'd love to beta for you. All of 2014 I have barely done any beta'ing for people (I have my reasons) and I'm trying to change that and get back into helping other writers with more than just RTs. =)

Kim Van Sickler said...

Forces of Mist sounds like there could be some deep dark secrets involved...

J.L. Campbell said...

Hi, Carolyn,
I know how limited time is when things start hopping. Sounds like you're making good progress with your book. Keep at it.

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